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        “What!?” Jeff yelped, jumping from his seat.

        “She’s not in her crib, she’s not with Sally and Scarlett, I can’t find her!”

        Jeff’s eyes darkened, a scowl stretching his carved grin downward. “It was Jane I’ll bet.” He snarled. “I had a feeling she would try something like this, I hoped she wouldn’t but…” He trailed off shaking his head. “Slendy, what do we do? That bitch got my baby girl…” He moved over to the distraught (Your name), who was trying to hold back her tears, and wrapped an arm around her, pulling her against his chest.

        “Simple.” Kitten spoke from her perch on the back of the couch. She jumped down, her eyes turning to the couple. “We track her down.”

        “And how do you suppose we do that?” BEN asked, glancing over.

        “Again, simple. Jeff, call Smile.” She paused and closed her eyes while Jeff reluctantly let go of (Your name) and walked to the front door to call for his red and black dog. A few minutes later both the grinning Husky and Kitten’s blue eyes Doberman sat in the baby’s room, patiently waiting for orders.

        “All right you two,” Kitten kneeled before the two canines. “Get a good sniff around, pick up every scent you can.”
       Both dogs stood and began sniffing furiously at the ground, pacing the room. Suddenly, Smile’s head shot up.

        Here, it’s Jane’s scent mixed with some other females…” Kitten nodded and spoke, repeating the dogs words. “Smile got Jane’s scent along with another girls.” The neko crouched, taking a deep sniff at the spot Smile sat beside.

        She lifted her head, eyes narrowing. “Of course.” She growled, standing to face the others. “Alice.” 

        Jeff glared at the spot. "Why would Jane be with Alice?" He asked.

        "Revenge." (Your name) spoke up from the doorway. Everyone turned to her, confusion flashing in their eyes.

        "Revenge?" Jeff repeated quizzically. "Why would Jane want revenge?"

        "Both of them do." The (Hair color) haired girl continued. "Jane doesn't like you at all, and Alice is after me for getting away when Kitten saved me from Zalgo. Since neither of them could get to us, they wen't for the next best, and easiest, thing they could take. Cynthia."

        "Makes sense." Masky muttered. "They both want revenge on the two of you, but with us protecting they couldn't get to you, so they waited.."

        Hoody picked up where Masky trailed off. "...And when they noticed we weren't suspecting anymore they went for the most vulnerable. The easiest to get."

        (Your name) sighed, wiping the tears from her cheeks. "What do we do?" She mutters. "They'll probably..." She chokes on the last two words and leans her head against Jeff's chest as everyone looks over at the two. She didn't have to say it out loud for them to know what she was gonna say.

 'Kill her..'

Edit-- Guys, im very sorry to announce but i probably will not be continuing this story. I've lost all interest in it, and forgotten the plot that i originally had for it. Please don't be upset, i will try to at least get it to the end (Though it'll probably be short and crappy) but im not promising anything. For more information read my Summer Cleaning and Updates journal.

Part 14 for all you lovlies.

Why would Jane and Alice do such a cruel thing? Will they really kill your baby? Or will you find them in time. All that and more in the next part.

All the creepypasta's belong to the one's who made them.
You belong to Jeff
Cynthia belongs to you and Jeff ((Because he did help make her c: ))
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dreamseeker1997 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you can't posiably be telling the truth do they get the baby back please i have to know!
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Deductions504 Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New member
FOR THE LOVE OF SMILE DOG'S KAWAIINESS, MAKE ANOTHER PART!!!!!!!!!!
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ButterWolf134 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2015
Is there gonna be another part or no?
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TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Student General Artist
I don't plan on finishing this story, so no, I'm sorry.
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ButterWolf134 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015
Awe, oki ;-;
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Shikonozunima Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015
Me: "OH HELL NO GIVE ME BACK MY BABY YOU BITCH I WILL FUCK YALL UP" lunges at them with my scythe
Jeff: Laughs "y'all are so dead"
Me: fights them and cuts off their heads and chops them up with a hatchet and gets my baby back laughing evilly 
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*eye twitches* *passes out*
misery: shit everyone RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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fireangel71301 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm with ya there...
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:iconkotadog88:
kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*wakes up* get back here NOW!!!!!!
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:iconfireangel71301:
fireangel71301 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Nuuu! (-n-)
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:iconkotadog88:
kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I swear to god get back here or die!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconfireangel71301:
fireangel71301 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Nuuu! I cannot die right now! I'm too young!!!?!!??
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:iconkotadog88:
kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
then get back here!!!!!!
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:iconfireangel71301:
fireangel71301 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Nuuu! I'm only 2000 years old! I can't die now!
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Xxbudderqueenxx Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
FINISH IT PLZ I WNNA SEE DEM DIIIIEEEEE
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:iconxxbudderqueenxx:
Xxbudderqueenxx Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
OHMAGAWD I'LL KILL EM ALL
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:iconblackdragon365:
I"LL GRIND THEM TO BITS Chainsaw 
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Ask-Vixy-the-Fox1987 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
YOU EARNED A WATCH, NOW FINISH IT!!!!
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Ask-Vixy-the-Fox1987 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
FINISH THE GODAMN STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LUV IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconkotadog88:
kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
needy much?
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Ask-Vixy-the-Fox1987 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Yeah XD
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:iconkotadog88:
kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
OH HECK NO! GET MY KNIVES JEFF IM GOIN ON A DEMON HUNT! Alice better be in wonderland when I get to her Chitanda Smile Icon 
them::o (Eek)   Poke!! - High-five! 
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
yep that is me a overprotective friend and daughter of the family even tho I am only 13 I know how to fight hand combat and sword and knife combat *smirks* alice~ jane~~~~ JOIN THE SHADOW? THEMN DIE
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Dood just like me! 13 and all. My brothers taught me how to use guns and we would shoot from the back of the truck in their parking spot to where on the side there's plastic pots. I was better than my oldest brother -0-.
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
O_O
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
On like,my first try I hit the middle of the plant pot and my brother missed it .-. I made it every time. And it's a good distance,we used different ones.
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:iconkotadog88:
kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*smirks* then can you help with something
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
( grins ) sure! Whatcha need?
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:iconkotadog88:
kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I have alittle grudge with zalgo can you help me kill him
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worldsgreatestgirl Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Please continue
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animegirl698 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Artist
make more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Roxel813 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Well fucking Shit. I hope Jane and Alice FUCKING DIE. I Love this story and would like to see more of it. =3
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fizzy284 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well Damn.... SHIT JUST GOT REAL!!! I'mma bouta slap a ho!!! Them bitches gonna DIE tonight!!! *laughs crazily* Jeff: that's my little demon.... *pats my head*
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husoldier77 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Ughhh I need chapter 15 D:
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Jeffythekiller123 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014   Traditional Artist
DON KILL MY BABY GURL!!!
PLZ CONTINUE!!! PLZ!
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xXHollowLittleSoulXx Featured By Owner Edited Jul 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh god, you have to finish this!!!! ;A;
I know you said you wouldn't but please!!!!! :sad: 
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:iconmuiopu98:
muiopu98 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
NOT MY BABY! JEFF, GO KILL THEM!
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orange-pie13 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
CONTINUE!!! Please!!!
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slendrgurl Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
Please please continue it!!! :( Pretty please with cherries on top!! i REALLY love this story please don't just stop it. PLease please please consider it :(
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wrays5331 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
OHMYGOD PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!
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TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Read the description please ^^;
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Elize-The-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Read the story for yourself. Maybe that would help
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TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Tried that :\ I've probably ready it about 15 times now and it hurts more and more every time i go through it cause the crappiness is just ehhhhhhhhhh X.X
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Elize-The-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
You want to try the fanfic i made?

kisstina666.deviantart.com/jou…

here you go
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TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Oooo that was a nice read~! You've got some talent hun!
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Elize-The-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
You liked it? I hope it helps
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:icontheuntamedartist:
TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Student General Artist
I did like it, yes, but im not sure it'll help with the fanfic ^^;
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Cry forever 
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rainbowdash2099575 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014   Artisan Crafter
Where is the next chapter?! I'm cryin my eyes out here and I would like to know what happenes!!!
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