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        “What!?” Jeff yelped, jumping from his seat.

        “She’s not in her crib, she’s not with Sally and Scarlett, I can’t find her!”

        Jeff’s eyes darkened, a scowl stretching his carved grin downward. “It was Jane I’ll bet.” He snarled. “I had a feeling she would try something like this, I hoped she wouldn’t but…” He trailed off shaking his head. “Slendy, what do we do? That bitch got my baby girl…” He moved over to the distraught (Your name), who was trying to hold back her tears, and wrapped an arm around her, pulling her against his chest.

        “Simple.” Kitten spoke from her perch on the back of the couch. She jumped down, her eyes turning to the couple. “We track her down.”

        “And how do you suppose we do that?” BEN asked, glancing over.

        “Again, simple. Jeff, call Smile.” She paused and closed her eyes while Jeff reluctantly let go of (Your name) and walked to the front door to call for his red and black dog. A few minutes later both the grinning Husky and Kitten’s blue eyes Doberman sat in the baby’s room, patiently waiting for orders.

        “All right you two,” Kitten kneeled before the two canines. “Get a good sniff around, pick up every scent you can.”
       Both dogs stood and began sniffing furiously at the ground, pacing the room. Suddenly, Smile’s head shot up.

        Here, it’s Jane’s scent mixed with some other females…” Kitten nodded and spoke, repeating the dogs words. “Smile got Jane’s scent along with another girls.” The neko crouched, taking a deep sniff at the spot Smile sat beside.

        She lifted her head, eyes narrowing. “Of course.” She growled, standing to face the others. “Alice.” 

        Jeff glared at the spot. "Why would Jane be with Alice?" He asked.

        "Revenge." (Your name) spoke up from the doorway. Everyone turned to her, confusion flashing in their eyes.

        "Revenge?" Jeff repeated quizzically. "Why would Jane want revenge?"

        "Both of them do." The (Hair color) haired girl continued. "Jane doesn't like you at all, and Alice is after me for getting away when Kitten saved me from Zalgo. Since neither of them could get to us, they wen't for the next best, and easiest, thing they could take. Cynthia."

        "Makes sense." Masky muttered. "They both want revenge on the two of you, but with us protecting they couldn't get to you, so they waited.."

        Hoody picked up where Masky trailed off. "...And when they noticed we weren't suspecting anymore they went for the most vulnerable. The easiest to get."

        (Your name) sighed, wiping the tears from her cheeks. "What do we do?" She mutters. "They'll probably..." She chokes on the last two words and leans her head against Jeff's chest as everyone looks over at the two. She didn't have to say it out loud for them to know what she was gonna say.

 'Kill her..'

Edit-- Guys, im very sorry to announce but i probably will not be continuing this story. I've lost all interest in it, and forgotten the plot that i originally had for it. Please don't be upset, i will try to at least get it to the end (Though it'll probably be short and crappy) but im not promising anything. For more information read my Summer Cleaning and Updates journal.

Part 14 for all you lovlies.

Why would Jane and Alice do such a cruel thing? Will they really kill your baby? Or will you find them in time. All that and more in the next part.

All the creepypasta's belong to the one's who made them.
You belong to Jeff
Cynthia belongs to you and Jeff ((Because he did help make her c: ))
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:iconxxbudderqueenxx:
Xxbudderqueenxx Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  New member
FINISH IT PLZ I WNNA SEE DEM DIIIIEEEEE
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:iconxxbudderqueenxx:
Xxbudderqueenxx Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  New member
OHMAGAWD I'LL KILL EM ALL
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BlackDragon365 Featured By Owner Edited Jan 16, 2015  New member
I"LL GRIND THEM TO BITS Chainsaw 
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:iconask-vixy-the-fox1987:
Ask-Vixy-the-Fox1987 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
YOU EARNED A WATCH, NOW FINISH IT!!!!
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:iconask-vixy-the-fox1987:
Ask-Vixy-the-Fox1987 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014  Student Digital Artist
FINISH THE GODAMN STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LUV IT SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!!!!!!
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  New member Student Digital Artist
OH HECK NO! GET MY KNIVES JEFF IM GOIN ON A DEMON HUNT! Alice better be in wonderland when I get to her Chitanda Smile Icon 
them::o (Eek)   Poke!! - High-five! 
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worldsgreatestgirl Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Please continue
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:iconanimegirl698:
animegirl698 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Artist
make more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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:iconroxel813:
Roxel813 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Well fucking Shit. I hope Jane and Alice FUCKING DIE. I Love this story and would like to see more of it. =3
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fizzy284 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well Damn.... SHIT JUST GOT REAL!!! I'mma bouta slap a ho!!! Them bitches gonna DIE tonight!!! *laughs crazily* Jeff: that's my little demon.... *pats my head*
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husoldier77 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
Ughhh I need chapter 15 D:
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:iconjeffythekiller123:
Jeffythekiller123 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
DON KILL MY BABY GURL!!!
PLZ CONTINUE!!! PLZ!
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:iconxxhollowlittlesoulxx:
xXHollowLittleSoulXx Featured By Owner Edited Jul 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Oh god, you have to finish this!!!! ;A;
I know you said you wouldn't but please!!!!! :sad: 
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:iconmuiopu98:
muiopu98 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
NOT MY BABY! JEFF, GO KILL THEM!
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:iconorange-pie13:
orange-pie13 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
CONTINUE!!! Please!!!
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:iconslendrgurl:
slendrgurl Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
Please please continue it!!! :( Pretty please with cherries on top!! i REALLY love this story please don't just stop it. PLease please please consider it :(
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:iconwrays5331:
wrays5331 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
OHMYGOD PLEASE MAKE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON!
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:icontheuntamedartist:
TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Read the description please ^^;
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:iconelize-the-angel:
Elize-The-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Read the story for yourself. Maybe that would help
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:icontheuntamedartist:
TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Tried that :\ I've probably ready it about 15 times now and it hurts more and more every time i go through it cause the crappiness is just ehhhhhhhhhh X.X
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Elize-The-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
You want to try the fanfic i made?

kisstina666.deviantart.com/jou…

here you go
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:icontheuntamedartist:
TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Oooo that was a nice read~! You've got some talent hun!
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:iconelize-the-angel:
Elize-The-Angel Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
You liked it? I hope it helps
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:icontheuntamedartist:
TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Student General Artist
I did like it, yes, but im not sure it'll help with the fanfic ^^;
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Cry forever 
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rainbowdash2099575 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014   Artisan Crafter
Where is the next chapter?! I'm cryin my eyes out here and I would like to know what happenes!!!
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:icontheuntamedartist:
TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Read the description please ^^;
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:iconrainbowdash2099575:
rainbowdash2099575 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014   Artisan Crafter
Ohh. Oops. THAT JUST MAKES ME MAD!!! D:
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:icontheuntamedartist:
TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Rlly sorry :( *Goes to corner of shame*
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:iconrainbowdash2099575:
rainbowdash2099575 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014   Artisan Crafter
iz ok. *sigh*
good things never last.
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:icontheuntamedartist:
TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Well if it makes you feel better, the lost at sea fanfic is gonna be a whole lot better ((Though all my watchers are gonna kill me at the end CX))
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rainbowdash2099575 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014   Artisan Crafter
ok then. send me the link.
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:icontheuntamedartist:
TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Here ya go~ ((You get to be a cop.))
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SlendyFox321 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cynthia is my grandma's name!


*all eyes turn from Zalgo too the bitches who kidnapped Cindy* U MUST DIE!!!*SHOOTS LAZERS FROM MY EYES LIKE A BADARSS!!*
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loveteddylove1 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Professional General Artist
i love thios story but im stuck on this one is ther eany more parts/chapters if there is please send me a link if not i really want to finish this series
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:icontheuntamedartist:
TheUntamedArtist Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Student General Artist
this is the last part thats been updated, part 15 is still on the writing block :)
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PikaHolly Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Woahwoaheoah...IT WAS BAD ENOUGH THAT JANE WAS AFTER ME, I HATE THAT FAKER BITC AD SHE HATE ME TOO...BUT WHEN MY BABY GOES MISSING...IMMA KILL HER WITH MY KNIFE BAZOOKA, DANCE ON HER GRAVE, DRINK HER BLOOD AND RIP OUT THEIR INTESTINES...AT LEAST NOW I HAE A SERIALLY GOOD REASON TO HATE AD KILL THAT WHITE ASS BITC..×Δ×
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AllTheLittleWonders Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Student General Artist
I'll fucking go 2P England / 2P America / 2P Italy (a terrifying mix if you as me) on them if they hurt my baby ̣nó
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:iconblackdevilwhitedemon:
In that case, NO ONE should mess with you. 
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:iconallthelittlewonders:
AllTheLittleWonders Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student General Artist
no, no they shouldn't > 3 >
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IcedragonBitch Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Those bitches are gonna die tonight *gets an evil grin* 
:kiwf: :sniper :hitwithbat: Rambo butterfly kill kill the dead 
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Kittycat1313 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student General Artist
Is chapter 15 done? :|
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:iconniptaard13:
Niptaard13 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
Is it bad that I was like "WHOOP GO RIGHT AHEAD I HATE CHILDREN!"
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:iconphantomcustom:
PhantomCustom Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No I WAS LIKE DAT TOO XD
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:iconniptaard13:
Niptaard13 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
Thank go I wand there only one XD
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:iconphantomcustom:
PhantomCustom Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
IM JUST READING COMMENTS AND SOME OF THE STORYLINE OR PLOT XD
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Alice-Vargas Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I can't wait for ch 15!!! :D
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sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
where is chapter 15?
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:iconsassy3dcat:
sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
Stabbed in the gut, just like Jack the Ripper! Stabbed in the back! :backstab: remake The Seriously Evil Laugh :kiwf: 
run
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littlebit36577 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
WHAT
THE
FUCK
JANE??!??!?!!!??IFDSOJHFVDSHAIDHSAUIFHWEIAUFHWEUIFHIUDSWACFU
*ahem* *pulls out knife and machete* Jeffy, you better kill those fucking bitches =-=
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